Monday, March 31, 2014

Déjà Vu (First Draft)

  Déjà Vu 
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Players:
FERNANDO: A man moving into his twenties, brown caramel skin with thick short black hair. He always wears black or white suites, rarely with a tie. He’s very handsome and a body builder. Although he’s addicted to cheating and smoking a pack of cigarettes a day. He was in love with the idea of falling in love. He worked as a fisher man. He’s a kind-honest man to most, but can have a bit of a mean streak.

MICHELLE: A woman in her late twenties, love to dance and wear tight clothing. She's in love with the idea of finding true love. She's extremely scandalous and a mother of two. Her skin is white and smooth as a baby’s bottom; wrinkled free. She have short, burgundy, permed hair. When it comes to having fun; she’s not the type of person to hold back.

SUE: A bright brown eyed, playful 7-year-old girl. She’s quiet and carefree.

SUSANA:  A 17-year-old girl with a little temper. She’s quiet, honest and shy, not the type to wear dresses or skirts. She always wears Nikes and black arm warmers.

ANDREW: Sue’s only brother, 12-year-old. Short black hair and outspoken.

AIDEN: A brown eyed 16-year-old boy, short curly hair. He wears a pair of black Jordan’s or sometimes gray Polo sneakers. He carries a small-square-rimmed transition glasses, and blue slim cut skinny Levis jeans. He’s very quiet, smart, and honest. He never talk, unless he’s spoken too.

First Scene: In a New York City High School. On a bright sunny day, windows are wide open. Students are sitting in their seats with their coats, listening to instructions from the teacher.

Stage Directions:
        As the curtain rises, SUSANNA is sitting in a classroom with a binder on her lap and a pen to her chin. She’s watching the tree outside the window. On the tree two song sparrows fight over a piece of leaf. In the background, an astronomy teacher calls each student, by names to pair in groups. A cloud moves swiftly to the left causing the sun to shine bright. The brightness blinding her momentarily. AIDEN enters:

AIDEN: Hey, I’m Aiden. (SUSANNA doesn't notice) HELLO O… anybody home?
(Sits in the chair beside his partner with a book)
(Poke...Poke)
SUSANA: Oh…hey…sorry…the sun in my eyes…um…what do you want?
(Rubbed eyes with both hands)
AIDEN: Ms. Lucas, she put us together, to answer these questions… on this paper.
(Pulls out a paper, from his book with, ten questions on both sides)
SUSANA: Oh I didn't hear her. I didn't do the homework last night, so I don’t know- what we’re doing.
AIDEN: Fine! I will answer these questions by myself.
(SIGH…Begin writing his name on the paper) 
SUSANA: Wait! I need to write my name… I need credit for this group work too you know.
(Smiles)
AIDEN: OK…hurry up… and your shoe lace is untie.
(Giving her the paper while holding back a smile)
SUSANA: Thank you!
(Bends to tie shoe lace with a smile)
AIDEN: Sueee-zanna…right?
SUSANA: No! My name is spelled with an S and only one N. It’s pronounced SUE-SAY-NA. There’s no Z in my name. Don’t piss me off!
(Looks Annoyed)
AIDEN: Feisty…I see.
(Chuckled)
SUSANA: Aiden right?
(Squints both eyes)
AIDEN: Yup! That’s me…
SUSANA: How did you get that scar on your eyebrow? Yo, that shit looks cool. I wish, I had one.
(Points to left eyebrow with a giggle)
AIDEN: Oh this? I got it in a car accident.
(Points to eyebrow with a serious face)
SUSANA: Holy Shit! You drive?
(Surprised)
AIDEN: No…When I was little. My dad was driving my mom and three sisters, to see my uncle’s new girlfriend. My mom was holding me in the front seat. I was little, so the cops couldn’t see me. My dad was driving us one night and a drunk driver crashed into us. I flew out the window and landed on the grass. My dad died along with my sister. This scar was actually bigger, it got smaller over the years.

SUSANA: WOW…So, now it’s just your mom and her three kids. I really like your scar though, I saw an Anime once, with this guy. He has a scar just like that…um…I think it was Naruto. Kakashi Hatake?
(Paused in shock… smiled)
AIDEN: WOW! You watch Naruto? I never met a girl that watch Naruto…that’s rare.
(Jaw drops in surprise)
SUSANA: What? No. Of course not. I was just comparing… something… I might have seen that is similar to your scar. Whatever…forget I even said anything.


(Rolls her eyes…)

AIDEN: I like you. You funny girl, you know that…Before, Ms. Lucas called my name to pair me in a group with you. I saw you watching out the window. You always watch out the window, what were you thinking?
(Laughs out loud…pushed up glasses and leaned back in chair)
SUSANA: Thinking? What made you think, I was thinking something…what the hell? You’re a telepath now?
(Squints one eye, looking closely and observing)
AIDEN: No, but I just wanted, to get to know you, a little a better. You’re always quiet and sometimes don’t come to class. You don’t even participate in class, you’re always day dreaming. I just wanted to know, what do you dream about? When you stare out the window.
(Stares intently)
SUSANA: Well, I guess, it’s only fair I tell you…Because you just told a piece of your story.
(Slightly tilting head while biting down on lips)
AIDEN: I’m waiting…
SUSANA: Wait…You’re so impatient…I need time to gather my thoughts.
(Sigh...)
AIDEN: Patience is a virtue! Hurry up before class ends…Your trying to kill time, aren't you?
(Shakes head from side to side in disappointment)
SUSANA: Nooo…I like to draw... when I look outside the window, I try to trace, what I see. You see that tree right there?
(Talks in a gentle tone)
AIDEN: Yea?
(Turns and look out the window)
SUSANA: I drew it. I like to trace things in my mind. If, I like what I see, after-class I go home and draw it on paper. It helps me keep clam and away from here.
(Feeling pressured)
AIDEN: Why do you need to keep calm? Why do you need to be away from here?
(Respond in curiosity)
SUSANA: I have a bit of a temper... I…I hate my past and I’m afraid…what my future might be…so I prefer to dream about the good….. In this shit-hole, we call life…Maybe... if, I dream more often. My future won't turn out that bad…hopefully!
(Feeling scared, stuttered… while clenching fist)
AIDEN: Don’t stop…tell me, tell me your story…. I’m listening.
(Observing)
SUSANA: OK…I always wanted to be a writer. I always dreamed of becoming a writer someday.... But only, if, people are willing to listen. When I talk to people, they ignore me…I had many friends but, now I’m a ghost that lurks in the hallway.
(Sigh)
AIDEN: I’m listening, aren't I?
(Sits up straight and placed right ankle on knee)
SUSANA: Yeah, actually you are…Not many people would listen.
AIDEN: Duh! Because you’re always… invisible to everyone. You lurk in the shadows, but I noticed you…well, I only noticed you because I’m an observer and a listener. So I’m listening…continue!
(Smiling)
SUSANA: Okay! I’ am new at this…so don’t throw questions at me. I get nervous fast, and my hands shake.
ADIEN: OK…I’m Sorry I pressured you!
SUSANA: It’s cool…Anyways… as I was saying, I always wanted to write a novel someday. But, If, I am… considering on writing a novel. This is how it would go...
                                                     
    ACT 2:
Second Scene:
            Inside a Green and white house with bright pink steps leading to a dark-blue door. There’s three rooms, the first bedroom is white with, a king-sized bed near a Panasonic Cathode Ray Tube. A small kitchen in the second room, painted brown with a light bulb hanging from the ceiling. Below, the bulb there’s small dinner table, with two chairs. The third room is painted light-green near the door, there’s a brown closet filled with perfume bottles on top. On the right side of the closet, with a rusty padlock dangling. There’s a double bunk-bed nearby.

Stage Directions:  

     The curtain rises, SUE comes home from school, gripping her pink book bag straps in fear. After seeing dry blood spotting on the bottom of the steps, she slowly tip-toed up the stairs following, her parents voices. On the forth step she noticed the blood became thicker, and the smell became raw and fresh. FERNANDO enters:

FERNANDO: I can’t deal with this fucking bullshit! …I’m late for work… You’re always holding me back from my job! You’re always fucking harassing me, leave me the fuck alone.
(Shouting in rage…)
SUE: Oh my god!
(Whispered… Heard heavy footsteps coming down…run to hide)
FERNANDO: You better clean this fucking house, before I get back...Woman.
(SHOUTING...Slams the door shut)
SUE: Mommy. Mommy?
(Whispered while tip-toeing up the stairs, towards someone sobbing)
MICHELLE:  Sue… Is that you?
(Sitting on the kitchen floor, holding an orange rag to the head, soaked in blood)
SUE: Yeah! Yeah it’s me mommy… Sorry I came home late again, from school…what happened this time? Did daddy choke you again… because you didn’t let him get dress for work? Uh…? Did daddy hurt you again mommy? Why you not answering? …mommy…?
(Takes a knee)
MICHELLE: Yeah! He hurt me bad this time. I’m sorry, Sue…before…before daddy left today, he slapped mommy hard… so hard…now mommy’s lips are swollen.
(Stuttered, while sobbing)
SUE: …Oh…You need anything mommy? You want me to call the police?
MICHELLE: No! I need you to sit here with me, until your brother comes home from school.
SUE: Okay mommy.
(Sits against the wall…unzipping book bag, pulls out a kerchief)
MICHELLE:  I’m sorry Sue.
SUE: Mommy why-you sorry?  Here…take this rag, that one is leaking blood. But you did nothing wrong…Daddy always beats you. What did you do to make him this angry mommy? Why daddy hate you so much?
(Sigh)

MICHELLE: Your daddy don’t hate me… Your daddy is young, he’s not leaving this house to work. Your daddy left, so he can cheat on me. Your daddy is a cheater, he was cheating on me last night.
SUE: …Oh... Mommy I don’t believe daddy was cheating on you. I think daddy loved you so much… he beats you to stay. I love my daddy and I know he’s not cheating. You just make him angry!
MICHELLE: Your daddy is a good man Sue. But your daddy have too many bad friends. These friends… he keep around him. These friends… I hate so much, are the ones that make your daddy this way.
SUE: Mommy I know. I know daddy is a thief and a liar. I know daddy have bad friends, but I like to see my daddy… as...a good man. I don’t want to see the bad in him.
(Coughing)
MICHELLE: I know Sue. Mommy wished, she could see the good in daddy…but, sometimes I feel…daddy beat me so bad every day. It’s hard Sue…it’s very hard for me to see the good in him anymore.
(Loud sobbing)
SUE: I know.... I understand mommy. Mommy what happened to your hand? It’s bleeding…a lot mommy? Last night you didn't come home…after you left, looking for daddy.
MICHELLE: Last night, I went to his parents’ house. I saw his dad drinking beers, and smoking with his friends. I didn't see your grandma, nowhere. A lot of people was there drinking and smoking drugs at your grandparents’ house.
SUE: Did you see daddy?
MICHELLE: No! Most of them was your father’s friends, they recently came out of jail. I saw his younger brother and some whores touching him. Your father’s brother… is your Uncle… You remember him, right Sue?


(Coughing)

SUE: Yeah! I remember. A lot of daddy’s friends. They always babysit me, how can I forget their faces.
MICHELLE: Yeah! Well your Uncle just came out of jail. He and your dad robbed a jewelry store. But the police never caught your dad. This is why… he rarely home.
SUE: It’s okay…its ok mommy…I still have you!
MICHELLE: Since your Uncle came out of jail, your father has been hanging around there. I think, he’s looking for a way to make fast money.
(Moves her daughter’s hair from her face)
SUE: You see mommy, daddy just wanted to be with his friends.
MICHELLE: Yeah! But I don’t want your daddy to go back to jail again. This is why…I try to stop him, from hanging around there. But, he keep abusing mommy.
(Takes deep breath and exhale)
SUE: Okay mommy. I understand. You have to try and let daddy do whatever, he want. If, you don’t he will hurt you more. I don’t want to come home and not see you alive. I need my mommy here.
MICHELLE: I know…but your mommy love your daddy. You can understand that right?
SUE: Yeah! I know…but you have to leave that fucking man alone. He will kill you! Look at you, your bleeding all over. I came home and there’s always blood somwhere. And it’s your blood, not his! Is he even bleeding? Mommy?
(Sigh…holds her mother’s hand)
MICHELLE: No! My nails, scratched him last week…this is why, he throw me down the stairs and burst my head.
SUE: You see… this is your fault…If you didn’t chased after him, then you won't have a broken arm right now. Mommy, next time…you might lose a foot…it might not be an arm, next time.
(Shaking head in disappointment)
MICHELLE: You’re right Sue. Who knew my baby girl would be this smart. 
(Smiles with content)
SUE: Yeah! I learned from you mommy.
 (Chuckled)
MICHELLE: Yes! Yes you do…but your daddy didn't break my hand today. His father did.
(Looks up with a smile)
SUE: What you mean…tell me mommy…tell me?


(Moves in closer)

MICHELLE: Last night your grandfather saw me asking, about your father. Your grandfather was with your dad, talking business... You’re grandfather screamed at me. “Get –out of my fucking yard,” and I was scared. I saw your dad came out… from behind him yelling, for me to leave. It was dark and I was scared. I refused to leave, so, your father picked up a thick bamboo. Your grandfather grabbed it from him, and beat me… with it. This is why…the steps is filled with blood. I couldn’t walk up the step by myself, instead I dragged my body up the stairs.
(Aloud burst of crying sound)
SUE: It’s okay…mommy. Mommy? Please don’t cry. You’re going to make me cry mommy. Please stop!
(Tear’s begin to drip down both cheeks)
MICHELLE: I can’t stop. Your father hurt me bad this time. He beats me like, he no love mommy no more Sue. Without him I am lost. I married Andrew’s father and I left him.
SUE: Mommy stop cry…please!
(Holding back tears)
MICHELLE: I should have stayed with your brother’s father. He was an alcoholic, but he never beat me like this. This is my biggest regret. I don’t know why…why god…made me fall in love with him.
SUE: Mommy…the blood from your arm… is...is not stopping! Mommy.
(Stuttering in sadness)
MICHELLE: I’m Sorry…Sue. Your brother should be home soon. I am just so hurt Sue. The pain and rage that is now growing in my heart, only god can understand, everything your father took from me. Because of your father my arm is broken Sue. Your father did this to me. Your father threw hot oil on my face, and burned the skin off. Now…no man would even look at me, I am ugly. You’re father pushed me down the stairs, and cracked my head. Your father kicked and choked me Sue! This is the same man… you love so much…that man you call daddy slammed my head into a wall and crack my skull. How much more can I take Sue? Please tell me… How much more will god throw at me until I die?
(More, sobbing)
SUE: Mommy stop it! I know daddy was cheating okay… I am sorry, I said… he wasn’t. We all caught him cheating, on the porch one night with another woman. I honestly don’t want you to stay with him no more. Okay…mommy?
(Loud and angry)
MICHELLE: I knew, how much you love your dad Sue. But that night; when you saw your father, on the porch with another woman. I heard your father whispered something to you, before he leave. What did, he whisper?
(Sniff. Sniff)
SUE: Oh yeah…I remember. He was so angry, we caught him cheating that day. After you and him argued in the other woman’s house. He turned to me and said, “Do you want come with me?” I said no…because I wanted to stay with you.
MICHELLE: You do know your father, would never hit you right?
SUE: Of course, I’m his little princess. Daddy loves me more…so…much more than you and Andrew.
MICHELLE: Yeah! He loved you. Because you’re his first and only girl child. You should have hopped on that motorcycle with him. 
(Noises coming from down stairs)
ANDREW: MOM...MOM YOU HOME? HELLO…ANYBODY HOME? MOMMY? SUE?
(Walking up the steps)
MICHELLE: Go tell your brother, I’m in the kitchen.
SUE: Okay mommy…ANDREW WE’RE UP STAIRS
(Shouting)
MICHELLE: I Said, go tell him…not scream. Oh god, give me faith with these two children.
(Muttered while checking hand wound)
ANDREW: What happened? Daddy beat you again?
MICHELLE: Both of you help me up…and go check, if the neighbors is home. Go tell them I need help!

ACT 3

Back to the first Scene: The teacher is lecturing in the background, while students is now being assigned to groups.

Stage Directions:   

         As the curtain rises, AIDEN is sleeping in his chair. SUSANA is trying to wake him up.
SUSANA: Hey…you there? ...Hello?
(Snaps fingers a few times)
AIDEN: Yeah…yeah I’m here?
(Opened both eyes. Looked up puzzled)
SUSANA: Why the hell are you sleeping? You know we in class right?
AIDEN: Yeah so.
SUSANA: SO…? Are you mentally retarded…? Or something?
(Shouting while standing)
AIDEN: No! I was just dreaming.
SUSANA: Dreaming my ass! You can do that on your time...move your long ass legs, so I can sit!
AIDEN: Oh. Sorry!
(Yarning while rubbing both eyes…pushed up glasses)
SUSANA: I’m SUSANA? This is the paper we gotta fill out!
(Passes paper)
AIDEN: Oh… I’m AIDEN.
SUSANA: Okay…I didn’t do the homework last night. So…you’re on your own.


(Sigh)

AIDEN: Why do I feel like this happen before..?
(Pressed pen repeatedly against chin…Click…Click…Click)
SUSANA: What you mean?
AIDEN: I felt like we met before.
(More Clicking…)
SUSANA: How can we meet before? Ms. Lucas just paired me with you?
AIDEN: You were in my dream.
(Clicking continues)
SUSANA: Dream?
AIDEN: Yeah! Before you woke me. I was dreaming about you.
(Click…Click…Click)
SUSANA: Stop! That’s annoying. Gosh. What was the dream about?
AIDEN: Oh…well….in my dream, your mom was abused by your dad.
SUSANA: How did you know that? Are you talking to friends? Are you fucking stalking me?
AIDEN: Wow. No, of course not. 


(Paused in surprise)

SUSANA: I know you stare at me a lot. I’m not stupid. You look at me weird, with those marble eyes.
(Angry)
AIDEN: I am not stalking you. It was just a dream I had.
(Chuckled)
SUSANA:  Ok… if you say so.
(Bell Rings…Gets up from seat and walk swiftly to the door)
AIDEN: Hey! Wait….Hold on.
SUSANA: Uh…
(Kept walking swiftly)
AIDEN:  Hey! Wait. SUE! I HAVE A QUESTION…
(Gets up from chair. Dropping someone’s paper…walking fast toward the door)
SUSANA: What the hell? Let go of me!
(Struggles to pull her hand away)
AIDEN: Did your dad ever abuse your mom?
(Gripped tighter)
SUSANA: Yeah! I gotta go…
(Whispered then pull away with force and left the arm warmer behind)
AIDEN: Oh…I guess my dream was true. Wow….am I bleeding? Oh shit. Wait a minute. This arm warmer is filled with blood inside.
(Picked the paper from the floor… noticed blood inside the arm warmer. Looked up and sighed)
THE END!

Sunday, March 16, 2014

Personal Poem (1st draft)

You say---> She say <--- I say

You say you love her,
so why abuse her.
She screams "I love you"
but you turn away.
She grabs your hand, and you slap her.
She said "I don't want you to leave."
You say "I have to go"
She grabbed you once more,
and you grabbed her by the neck.
I see perfume bottles hit the floor.
I hear her screaming.
I counted "1, 2, 3."
She screams "I'm bleeding."
You grabbed her hair, and dragged her across the floor"
She yells "Stop,
Stop! Please stop…"
You grabbed the keys and locked the door.
I say "let him go."
She says "I love him too much."
I say "leave him alone."
She says "I can't."
I say "he will kill you."
She says "I can't live without him."

I say "to be continued"

Saturday, March 8, 2014

My Writing Space!


        My special writing place can be anywhere in the world. I'm not that type of person who sits at home or at Starbucks spending hours to write. I hate quiet places and I find most of my inspiration in the most boisterous places I can think of, like time square or parties. I'm an artistic person and I want to be able to turn my artwork into words. My artwork already have meaning and mystery behind them. But I want to bring it more alive with short stories, poems and plays. My writing place can be anywhere because I have a photographic memory. I have a wide imagination and many places to explore around the world like Paris, Tokyo and London. Once I capture an image I'm able to sketch an outline on paper, but only once. I get my inspiration from many different places like Times Square, clubs, bars, parks and the late midnight stars. I don't have a specific place or location I like to write. My special place for writing have to be a place depending on my type of writing. For example, if I am writing a non-fiction story I have to be indoors. If I'm writing a story based on fantasy then I have to be out doors. I have to feel the inspiration from a place to write about it.   

   GOAL: always keep believing in love,  keep writing and drawing while traveling to different places. 
Dreams: is to get my degree in the animal field (vet) 
                                          Author influence
                                      
                  One person who have inspired my writing is Thomas Fink. He is a writer/artist. Mr.Fink changed my perspective in writing. In the beginning I didn't understand most of the poems I read, most of it was a blur. There was too many metaphors, and i didn't see the creativity used in most writings. He encouraged me to write about art and express it, the way i see it. He influenced my writing in a creative manner because, he changed my perspective on writing. This helped me to express my artwork through words in a creative way.